Hello everyone my name is Charlie and my Korean name is Sung Jun kim. I will talk about kony 2012.(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1bp8oJMAhM). Do you know a person called Joseph Kony?? Joseph Kony is the leader of LRA and he kidnapps boys for soldiers and girl for sex slaves. He is a bad person and he did many bad things to kids. The person who made the video knoy 2012 is Jason Rusell and he said Kony kidnapped boys and girls for 20 years but people didn't know because they were not interested. So Jason Ruseel made a video and uploaded on youtube and it became a viral video. He also made a facebook called 'the invisible children' and there are many people. He toutght if he makes Joseph Kony famous he can capture him and people will get interested to capture Joseph Kony. But they are many opinions about that. My opinion is that I agree that making Joseph Kony famous is good.
First, they made a video and uploaded on famous websites like facebook and in youtube so many people know Joseph Kony but they didn't know him in the past. Nowdays may people use internet and see it. So the people saw the video and knew about Joseph Knoy and the bad things he did to kids. So the video became famous and the people got interested about Joseph Kony and try to help the kids that are kidnapped. For example many people upload videos because if they get famous at the internet they get famous around the world. So Jason Rusell knew that so he uploaded a video and many people saw it. So I think amking Joseph Knoy famous was good,
Second, Joseph Rusell made Joseph Kony famous so many people aid they will help the war with Joseph Kony and the U.S governemt. Also the people donated a lot of money so with that money they helped the kids. For example, if you fight by yourself with out any help from other countries it will be hard. But they got the help of the U.S government and they are teaching the people and trying to find Joseph Kony.
Third, the Kony 2012 video became famous so many people donated money and tried to hep the peoples. For example, if mny people help you it is more easier to fight with the LRA. Also if you have money you can buy weapons or the equipment you need.The people who disagree about making Joseph Kony famous could say that the U.S government soldiers didn't find a clue or evidence where Kony was. But it is hard to fin him because they are hiding and they are in places whre it is hard to find. Also some people say that Joseph Kony didn't come to Uganda for 6 years but they are coming secretly and kidnapping the boys and girls.
I agree that making Joseph Kony famous was good because Joseph Kony kidnapped many kids for 20 years. I hope the people and the U.S. government find Joseph Kony and the people keep donating for the invisible children. Joseph Kony has to be caught!!!!!!!!!
By making him famous, it might be able to catch Kony more easily. However, always keep in mind, that making Kony famous means he will put in more effort to hide from public and keep him safe. There is always advantages and disadvantages in a plan.
ReplyDeleteYour essay will be better if you could use a paragraph to discuss possible disadvantages and introduce ways to overcome those disadvantages.
Good Work!
I agree that you should include opposing ideas to your opinion and rebute those. Remember to use spaces between paragraphs and to use spell check before you publish your work. The essay is well-written. Try adding pictures next time.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!